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posted by [personal profile] chibimonnie at 07:21am on 22/05/2011 under , ,
After the season finale I need to write and make things better. This my first time writing in the Supernatural fandom (and first fanfic I've written in years). I could really use a beta (or a few).

What I'm looking for:
-Consistency of character voice/personality with canon
-Consistency of canonical references
-Technical checks: consistency of tone, POV, grammar (even after all these years I still struggle with an overabundance of commas)
-Someone to reign me in when I get carried away (my prose leans toward purple sometimes)
-Someone willing to help me hash this whole thing out (sometimes I just need to talk about the story to get through the tricky spots)
-Need some help on the snark


Part I
Crowley has been on the run from Cas and the Winchesters. The boys catch up with Crowley in PA. They truss him up like Alastair in 4.16 On The Head of a Pin and grill him. He gives them nothing [haven't decided if the boys kill Crowley or not]. Back in their motel room they get a call from Chuck- he's at a rest stop on I-95 in DE, but has no idea how he got there; he's been having black outs not associated with prophesies or drinking. While on the road Chuck's demeanor changes suddenly from his usual neurotic, unsure self to commanding BAMF and orders the boys to go to [need to find a location]. Dean, of course, tries to argue but Chuck is unyielding and so they go. When they arrive they find Castiel routing some of Raphael's followers. Chuck steps between them and all fighting stops. R's followers bow down. God!Chuck orders them to return to Heaven and make peace, maybe gives them a lecture (totally disappointed Dad kind of vibe). He then turns to Cas and gives him a choice: die and be banished to Purgatory for all eternity OR become human and earn redemption. Cas chooses humanity. God!Chuck strips Cas of his grace and his wings. Cas collapses, and Chuck disappears. After some debate the Winchesters take Cas and Chuck to Bobby's. [Eventually want to get Sam/Dean/Cas together. Need to figure out the dynamics of the relationships].

So that's the gist of it. If you're interested, please drop a note in the comments. Thanks!
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